Bonus translation exercise 3 - maxim
人之所以有煩惱，皆源自貪瞋癡。
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Sunday, April 13, 2008
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9 Comments:
E4A 1093300020 Leticia Chen
People's vexation comes from people's greed, wrath, and ignorance.
what fret our hearts are greedy. dissatisfied and captivated.
E4B 1093300112
To Leticia,
1. "Vexation comes from greed, wrath, and addiction."
2.If your readers are general folks, do not use the words which are to sophisticated or even lingoes.
To Chung,
what fret our hearts are greedy. dissatisfied and captivated.
1. There are several grammatical errors here.
"...are greed, dissatisfaction, and captivation."
2. There is misunderstanding, too.
anger, fury...rather than dissatisfaction.
People have vexation, all because of greedy, silly and angry.
S4A Angel Chen 1092303003
To Angel:
People have vexation, all because of greedy, silly and angry.
1. It is "word for word" translation, and it is not correct grammatically.
2. It will sound better, if it is translated into:
a. "Vexation flows (comes) from greed, anger and addiction."
b. "The reasons why people feel vexed is all because of greed, anger and addiction."
注意詞性
Greed, anger, and addiction are the reasons, which make people be vexatious.
Greed, anger, and addiction are the reasons, which make people be vexatious.
E4B
1093300100
Karen
S4A 1092303013 Sophia Hsieh
people's vexation is originated from greed, anger and addiction.
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